Introduction to Poetry by Billy Collins (cautionary tale against interpretation over experience)
I ask them to take a poem
and hold it up to the light
like a color slide
or press an ear against its hive.
I say drop a mouse into a poem
and watch him probe his way out,
or walk inside the poem’s room
and feel the walls for a light switch.
I want them to waterski
across the surface of a poem
waving at the author’s name on the shore.
But all they want to do
is tie the poem to a chair with rope
and torture a confession out of it.
They begin beating it with a hose
to find out what it really means.
- This metaphor may be more literal than one might expect
- These analogies are inspired by a course I once took from the poet Billy Collins. He is one of my favorite poets because of the following (his ideas...my interpretation)
- Poems are histories of the heart (history told from the perspective of feelings and emotions and found in one's experience)
- Poems are held together by form
- rhythm (the dance of the poem)
- sound (the reading of the poem)-music?
- what if these conventions are absent (meter and rhyme)?-experience becomes less concentrated and predictable (no training wheels)
- set sequences versus free form (Ashtanga, Bikram)
- experimenting with "violations" of form
- Other ways:
- rituals (start the same way with each line
- gathers strength with repetition like a prayer or a chant
- sun salutations as initiation in to movement
- Internal patterns/scaffolding (rhythm and sound are not thrown away -just the metronome).
- Use the natural rhythms that we have (in our speech, nature, etc.)
- evenness of breath followed by evenness of movement equals evenness of mind (Ed)
- "Turning" (trust your own associations to lead readers/students)
- "visual games"-only purpose is to discover and arrive at the ending through associations of sound or movement (improvisation)
- one of the first skills that is learned is to go along with the premise you are given
- taking cues from your audience/students
- playfulness
- travel (from familiar to unfamiliar)
- path/journey metaphors
- gross to subtle
- simple to complex
- metaphor (connection to familiar things- correspondences)-puts an AFFECT on the movement to give it "life"
- movements are abstract
- actions are internal
- warrior (implies fierceness)
- companionship (once memorized in becomes part of you)
- romance of time (call to action, carpe diem, live more deeply)
- every moment is potentially auspicious
- seeing eternity in a grain of sand
- liminality allows the recognition of the importance of time (as it "stops" it)
- What keeps the reader/student in staying with you (listening)
- they come back for the poem (movement/practice) not you
- because they see you love what you do (performance/poetry/yoga) more than yourself doing it (share the same interest)
- Trust is essential in poetry
- readers/practitioners will trust if the knowledge and craftsmanship of the poet/teacher are established in the beginning
- What holds it together? Rhyme and meter creates a container for self expression
- why the breath is so important?
- Poetry are words imposed on silence. Is yoga movement imposed on stillness?
- the in-between spaces connecting one thing to another are as important as the postures/words/movements
- there is no posture, just transition, when one achieves a level of mastery
- the distinction between postures is arbitrary. in reality, all is movement if one is following their breath
- teaching conundrum: How much time does one spend on technique (deconstructing the flow) rather than mastery (Iyengar problem- paralyzed by technique)
- A poem progresses from small to large ideas.
- the subject you start with is provisional (a way in) it is quickly abandoned once the larger subject is revealed. Revelations may occur one after the other.
- the yoga quote at the beginning or near the end???? thoughts?
- can be seen purely on physical terms in yoga or from physical to emotional or philosophical.
- Yoga as a physical philosophy
- How these transformations occur is the process of a poem. This process of creation should be woven in to your teaching (your practice informs your teaching)
- though writing/creation according to a theme maybe generally useful, the process should not be limited by the theme
- you do not always have to know exactly where you are going until the end of the process (experiment)
- ritual progression is illustrated here (Van Gennep)-ensuring engagement determines the length and structure of each stage, also important to know how they are becoming disengaged-physically or in terms of mental attention
- separation
- transition
- reincorporation
- Good poems have the right amounts of "clarity" and "mystery"
- how is each used and when?
- which "cards" should be shown, and which should be left face down, or when should each be turned is part of good process
- some cards must be turned over for readers (students) to follow
- You are not a poet all the time, but you can be a poet when you are not writing
- relieves the anxiety of the blank page
- makes correspondences between practice in your body and the reality of your experiences off "the mat"
- Inspiration comes in many forms
- Quiet/stillness allows thoughts and experiences to enter (revelation/creativity/stillness yogis)-meditation?
- savasana
- moving into stillness?
- doing "nothing"
- imitation or prompt allows you to start-then you experiment (innovation)
- Introspection (note 20 things you experience yesterday in no particular order-inventory without chronology)...which is remembered?
- sublime in the ordinary
- Finish a poem in one sitting (even if it will later be changed)
- try to practice out and idea/physical experiment until it is finished
- there is always another idea
- Always surprise yourself
- take a surprise route
- surprise your students
- don't be afraid to fail. Look forward to it
- enjoy the messiness of process/write on paper, not computers so you save your mistakes instead of deleting them. They may not be mistakes in retrospect
- learning/creation is rarely linear
- The look of a poem on the page is important
- Poetry is intense/frustrating
- it's in your language but you can't understand it (immediately-instant gratification)
- poetry asks you to work for the understanding/meaning (can not be spelled out)
- takes patience and interest
- close examination
- discipline/attention
- meaning is unstable and ambiguous (meaning is deeper than the surface suggests)
- there may not be one meaning
- Take notes when you read a poem/try to understand
- leave footprints of your thinking
- insightful to read your notes-and see how you have changed
- Reading other people's notes in the margins
- Your voice is NOT inside you to find. Your voice will be found in the voices of others (teachers, students, experiences) but combined in a unique way so that you can't trace them back to their source.
- this is a synthesis of your experiences and worked out through your personal practice in yoga
- it's you when no one else could have taught the way you did. This may take time (Poets find this by reading all the poetry they can-yoga teachers do this by taking classes from as many great teachers they can)
- let some of your imperfections/personality into your teaching
- who will you be? what are the important qualities you want to bring to your teaching persona?
- me: humor, curiosity, geeky (intellectual), skeptical, a bit sarcastic, ordinary (unpretentious), private, teacher (educator), practitioner (dedicated).
- What can't be taught
- get beyond the (ego) to write/teach...lesson from the Gita
- voice-authentic, engaged, conversant, honest
- the writing of a poem/teaching is an experience, not the record of an experience.
- need to be present
- need to be engaged
- need to be responsive to your class
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